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Sunday, November 28, 2010

Pure Majesty!!!(Jingle Poetry Potluck)




Gracefully she moves,
MAJESTIC!
She awes,she delights!
MAJESTIC!

She roams the sea with elegance.
A queen that leaves you in trance.
She reigns the sea with her beauty.
A sorceress that makes you see eternity.

Behold her sight,for she's divine.
Behold her existence for she's a rarity!

36 comments:

dan roberson said...

Queen of the sea, reigning in awesome splendor. Whales are beautiful to watch. They're so powerful and so beautiful. Thank you for your descriptive poem.

Wanda's Wings said...

True majesty!

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks,Dan!One of my greatest wishes is to see one with my own eyes.

They are majestic creatures.And I love them to bits.

June_Butterfly said...

They are,aren't they,Wanda!

Thanks for always leaving a comment,dear!

scentofmyheart said...

Magical words, sea creatures and beauty of salty water!

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks for the visit,scentofmyheart!I love the sea.

The Unknowngnome said...

I like your closing line:

"Behold her existence for she's a rarity!"

A rarity indeed!

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks,Unknowngnome!I love that line ,too.They are indeed.one of natures most beautiful gifts to mankind.

Reflections said...

Amazing picture, your words step up to her majestic beauty.

June_Butterfly said...

Fell in love with the pic as soon as I saw it!So glad you loved as much as I did.The compliment is deeply appreciated.

Thanks for the visit,Reflections!

me_duress said...

Love the repetitions - truly brings out the sense of majestic propotions :)

June_Butterfly said...

So glad you liked it,Neha!Was actually reading this one aloud before I posted!Went a bit crazy,I guess.Haha!!

Brian Miller said...

this is lovely...very nicely done and the near repitition plays very well...

June_Butterfly said...

Hi,Brian.Thanks for the comment.Was feeling playful.Actually the repitition seemed a nice idea.So glad you liked it,too.

Shashi said...

Dear June

Its wonderful... I throughly enjoyed it. You have a way with describing nature and its element, this I have observed through my readings of your verses...

PS: Thanks for visiting my post. I have retouched my verse as it was the first draft in the morning today, as I wrote for Potluck... have a look, it has changed a lot.


ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

fiveloaf said...

lovely!

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks,Shashi!!I appreciate the compliments!

Ok,Shashi!Will definitely check it out!

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks,Kris Lee(fiveloaf)!Hope you can drop by,again!

Jingle Poetry said...

outstanding,
love the imagery and your words are perfect.
keep it up.
xxx

Hope said...

Perfect! very nice imagery!
thank you

jessicasjapes said...

You create a great image here and her power comes across. Loved it!


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R.S. Mallari (SpK) said...

Wish I could touch a Queen like that. Since young I am fascinated with these creatures.

Nice one June.

liv2write2day said...

The entire feel of your blog is MAJESTIC. It is a breath-taking experience to see one.

June_Butterfly said...

So nice of you to drop by,Jingle!Was worried won't be able to come up with a post for Potluck.But the pic made the words flow naturally.

Thanks for the compliments.

June_Butterfly said...

Loved yours too,Hope!It is always a learning experience reading your works.Thanks for always taking time to support mine.

June_Butterfly said...

Hi,Jessica.The picture was just so majestic it was like words were pulled out of me while I was looking at it!

Thanks for commenting!

June_Butterfly said...

One of my utmost dream is to see one with my own eyes.Always loved them.Hope I can one day.

Thanks for taking time to view my post,Ronald!Always a joy to see you!

June_Butterfly said...

You're so nice,Victoria.Still hav a long way to go with my writing but with people like you appreciating my efforts everyday is a joyful challenge.

Your place is truly beautiful,too.

Teresa said...

Wonderful tribute to such a great animal! Nicely done.

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks,Teresa.Sure love these creatures.Always leave me in awe!

Multibrand said...

Hi June,
I like this poem. Good!
Well done.

RiikaInfinityy said...

Beautiful written, hail the majesty and welcome her to poetry potluck :P!

signed...bkm said...

That majestic site...how beautiful to be blessed with it..blessings...bkm

June_Butterfly said...

Hi,Harry!Real nice of you to drop by and read my work.

I appreciate it.

June_Butterfly said...

Hi,Riika!!Yeah,hail her majesty Queen Whale!*smiles*

Thanks for dropping by!

June_Butterfly said...

signed..bkm,thanks so much for the compliment.it's so nice of you to drop by and comment.