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Monday, November 22, 2010

Canvas Love Affair!!(One Shot Wednesday)



Her face was sketched in perfect beauty!
With eyes so deep it may have been eternity!
She catches your soul with her serenity!
And make you forget your own identity!

She was the one who made you laugh!
She was the one who made you cry!
She was the one who made you sigh!
She was the one who made you smile!

And now at nights when stars are bright,
you gaze upon the sky and search for her light.
Looking for the brightest one in your sight.
Hoping it wouldn't disappear through the night.

And in the misty winter morning,
you lay in bed alone and shivering.
Your eyes met hers and felt a warmth so comforting.
As the girl in the canvas gave you a smile so enchanting.

32 comments:

Hope said...

what an intriguing sketch! is it yours?

the poem is magically written, capturing me right away
with the first verse
'her face was sketched in perfect beauty! With eyes so deep it may have been eternity! She catches your soul with her serenity! and make you forget your own identity!'

deep and compelling!

thank you

Brian Miller said...

lovely...first impression...thsiis pretty sad...so close yet so far away...and so in love with only a picture....written very nicely though...

Wanda's Wings said...

How magical the sketch and poem!

Carrie Burtt said...

Beautiful and magical...love the sketch...June your whole blog is beautiful! :-)

Caribbean Fool said...

That is a rather captivating poem. Very enjoyable read, thanks for posting.

crb.

June_Butterfly said...

No,Hope.Got it from devianart.I usually get my pics there.I wish it was mine,though.

I love the first lines ,too.Am so glad you liked it.

June_Butterfly said...

Yeah,it is indeed a sad love story.But the thought of being in love itself thus bring joy!

Thanks,Brian.Am glad you found it nice.

June_Butterfly said...

Fell in love with the pic as soon as I saw it.So glad you found my words magical as well,Wanda!

So nice to see you here,again.

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks,Carrie.The sketch indeed is very lovely!

I appreciate the compliment.Do drop by again.

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks,Carribean Fool.My heartfelt thanks for taking time to read my blog!

Happy one shot!

One Stop - The Place For Poets, Writers and Artists said...

the poem had that magic charm that woerked so well with the image..but i kinda felt an underlying sadness too...enjoyable read...and thanks for sharing with OSW...pete

Helena Malheur said...

lovely and magical... beautiful read!

Steve said...

Your usual romantic, hopeful work. Good stuff!

dustus said...

*sigh* sadness in the piece. Love the sketch too. Cheers

Eric Alder said...

Nicely put-together One Shot!

tolbert said...

I really enjoy your site and the opening lines of 'Canvas Love Affair' set the stage for a beautiful piece of artwork.

I found your poem to be intriquing and captivating as I felt the transition made from mysterious to every woman who walks the earth...

Beautiful.

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks for dropping by,Pete!Always a privilege to be able to be part of one shot!

I guess there is indeed sadness,but the love overcomes it.Kinda scary kind of love???

June_Butterfly said...

I'm so glad that lots of people found my work magical.Made the efforts worth it.

Please do drop by again,Helena.

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks,Steve!The sketch just made the words pour out!Am glad you like it!

June_Butterfly said...

I guess the feeling of being left alone thus bring out sadness.The sketch brought out both sadness and a feeling of deep love.

Thanks for dropping by,Dustus!

June_Butterfly said...

I loved yours,Eric.As usual good write.

Please drop by,again.

June_Butterfly said...

And your blog is so warm,Tolbert!Especially love the background musid.So enchanting!

I'm glad you enjoy coming here,too.Hope to see you lots.

Claudia said...

..With eyes so deep it may have been eternity!...loooooove this!!

Weston D Fosdeck said...

:)

Multibrand said...

Hi June,

A wonderful combination of sketch
on canvas and the love poem, WOW!
You amazed me.

June_Butterfly said...

Thank you so much ,Claudia.That line is one of my favs,too.

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks for dropping by,Weston!

June_Butterfly said...

Hi,Harry!Well,you amaze me ,always.But the sketch is lovely,isn't it.Fell in love with it the first time i saw it.

Aquarius63 said...

A captivating poem, your words paint a beautiful picture of longing.

Anita.

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks,Anita!The sketch helped me find the words for this poem.

Loved yours,too!

Shashi said...

Dear June

Beautifully written and I liked the repetition of lines so much.. thanks for sharing..

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June_Butterfly said...

Thanks,Shashi!I'm so glad you liked it.I hope I can wrtie inspiring ones like you always do.