Thursday, November 11, 2010

DAY and NIGHT!!!(Edited)

Like sweet shadows of dreams,night appears.
Reminders of ends and life's quiet fears.
Yet in dawn's sweet embrace,daylight will show its face!

In my darkest hours when nothing seems to glow.
Joys of long ago came rushing.Their faces to show.
A light within my darkness!Treasured memories flow.

I have lost sight of myself.Too many walks in the dark.
Yet in the end of each path a new knowledge spark.
A lesson painfully learned!Getting me back on track!

As there will be meetings,there will be partings!
As there will be loss,there will be things to gain!
As there will be Night,there will be a brand new Day!

(An old post I decided to edit.Hope you guys like it)


Wanda's Wings said...

Oh, I love that. It so true. If we can just learn to wait!

June_Butterfly said...

I know.Waiting can be painful sometimes.

I'm so happy you liked this,Wanda.Thanks for dropping by!

Brian Miller said...

nice. the circular nature of life you capture at the end...nice. if we know that the good is coming why do we let the badcripple us...and knowing the bad will eventually come should we not be prepared?

June_Butterfly said...

Got the logic there!Living is like a continous ride of ups and downs!I guess it's the when that makes it hard to be prepared!

Thanks for coming ,Brian!Always appreciate you taking time to read my work!Have a great day!

Olivia said...

Like it..? I loved it!!
This is so beautiful MyD.. Very hopeful and very bright.. I liked the look of your Blog- very dreamy.. :)

Love xxx

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks,Olivia!I still feel it's not it,but can't seem to find what I'm looking.But knowing you loved it made me happy!

That's me...a dreamer!

Hope said...

I love this!
your words speak truths

'I have lost sight of myself. Too many walks in the dark'

love the last line 'As there will be night, there will be a brand new day'

thank you

nothingprofound said...

"I have lost sight of myself. Too many walks in the dark." A great, great line. A poem in itself.

Jingle said...

at times, one single experience could not be taken seriously to judge whole,
your exploration is essential,
beautiful expression here.
hope you well.
keep writing.

Jingle said...

Special awards for you. Happy Sunday! xx
Hope to see you at our potluck tonight.

we are open Sunday 8pm, American central time, if you link a piece in as soon as we are open, you may get the best possible feedback.

we deserve another chance, your lovely talent deserves another chance to be read and encouraged.

welcome in tonight 8pm sharp.

Shail Raghuvanshi said...

That was lovely June.

You write like a butterfly flitting around...

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks,Hope.Actually the two lines you mentioned are favs lines of mine,too.

So glad you loved it.Makes the efforts worth it.

June_Butterfly said...

Marty,coming from you that sure is a treasure.I love your aphorisms.I'm so glad I can write lines you like.

Hope to see you again!

June_Butterfly said...

HI,Jingle!Thanks for you kind comments.I appreciate it.

Need to learn lots more,but hoping to write lots more.

June_Butterfly said...

Ok,Jingle.Will try to link one ,soon.Thanks for dropping by!

June_Butterfly said...

Oh,Shail!That's one of the prettiest compliments I've ever received.Thanks!

Claudia said...

this spoke to me...kind in a depressed mood today cause it's my daughter's birthday and she's not thanks...a welcomed warm sun ray...

June_Butterfly said...

I'm glad my words cheered you up ,Claudia!I guess you must be missing her so.

me_duress said...

Loved this - wish it as easy to apply as it fun to read :)

June_Butterfly said...

HI,Neha!Thanks for dropping by!Yeah,wish things were easier!

But we can wish...!

JamieDedes said...

Perfectly wonderful. Soulful and feeds the spirit to read it. Well done.

JamieDedes said...

I love it. Waiting is not something the human race is good at anymore.

Well, prolonged my Potluck stay to get to know you. Enjoyed my time here. I'll be back.

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks,Jamie.The compliment is deeply appreciated!

June_Butterfly said...

It was a joy to know you too,Jamie.Hope to see more of you here.Will visit you,too.

Always a pleasure to know fellow word lovers.

Thanks for dropping by!

H. Nizam said...

Hi June,

A wonderful combination of writing and picture. WOW!

June_Butterfly said...

I'm so glad you like it,Harry!I love the pic I used on this one,too!

Jingle said...

Welcome attending poets rally week 33, link in a poem, visit 18 poets, done,
Poetry awards assigned upon completion.
Happy Friday!
Thanks in advance for the attention!

June_Butterfly said...

Will try to,Jingle.Thanks for the info!

Jingle Poetry said...

welcome to our potluck tonight.
Happy Sunday!
your write excellent poetry.

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks,Jingle!Posted a poem.Hope you liked it!

Multibrand said...

Hi June,

This is my second comment on this post, because I really like it.

I wish that I can post it on my blog so that I can also share it to my readers.

Wishing you all the best.

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks,Harry!It's such a joy to know you like it so much!

Anytime you want to post,feel free,ok.It would be a privilege.