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Monday, November 15, 2010

My Legacy!!!(One Shot Wednesday)


In this world of lies you gave me truths!
In this world of emptiness you gave me purpose!
In this world of sadness you gave me joys!

You are the gift that life has bestowed upon me!
You are the treasure that fate has given to me!
You are the story that love has written for me!

When I return to dust as man his fate to be.
My legacy remains,with you it will forever be.
For we are one in blood .As it was meant to be!

74 comments:

moondustwriter said...

Priceless
as legacy always are
The words flowed in a perfect line

Thanks for sharing with One shot


Moon Smiles

June_Butterfly said...

Hi,Leslie!Am so glad you like it!

Thanks for dropping by!It was a joy to see you here!

poemblaze said...

A kind tribute. Thanks for sharing it.

Hope said...

Breathtaking! Wonderful rich, tender words of love.

love the painting! did you do it?

Andrea said...

Beautiful!
Blessings,
andrea

marousia said...

Beautiful sentiments tenderly expressed

marousia said...

Tender, heartfelt, beautiful poetry

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks,poemblaze!Found the pic and the words just flowed!

Hope you can drop by,again!

June_Butterfly said...

Didin't have the luxury of time ,but I'm glad was able to write something for one shot!

I wish I created this one,but unfortunately I can't draw,lest paint!

Devianart provides me with my photos!Glad you liked it!

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks for taking time to read my post,Andrea!

Do drop by,again!

June_Butterfly said...

Hi,Marousia!Thank you for your kind words!
Nice to meet you!

June_Butterfly said...

I love the feeling when I was writing this.Hope to see you again,Marousia!

amritaghosh said...

an inspiring legacy :-)

The Unknowngnome said...

Lovely, just lovely!

Truth, purpose, joy
bestowed, given, written for me
fate forever meant to be.

Great write June. It's often the one's that just flow as we write that give us the best feelings.

me_duress said...

Love the fact that most of your poems are so positive and cheerful!I struggle to do that.

June_Butterfly said...

Hi,Amrita!It's a joy to see someone new in my Blog!Always am thankful!

I hope you can visit,again!good day!

June_Butterfly said...

Unknowngnome,I am truly grateful for all the time you spend reading my works!It makes it all worth it!

I write best when I don't try,but just go with the flow.A mellow music and a good photo is waht keeps me going.

June_Butterfly said...

I'm not always successful though,Neha!Sometimes when I'm truly down it's so hard to find positive words to write!But I try.

You are a true writer ,with a style truly your own.It's always amazing to read your works.

Brian Miller said...

nice. you did very well with this one...it stirs in me feelings for those that played a role in my life getting me here...


sorry so late..got some junk i am taking care of....

Asobime said...

A lovely poem....straight to the bone, and the truth of the matter.

Lady Nyo

The Exception said...

kbaordThis poem described my daughter to me in such a profound way. Thank you for the words and the thoughts.

TALON said...

The photo and the words - both so touching!

Eric Alder said...

Wonderful tribute... it sings the praises of blood-ties. Nice One Shot!

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Steve said...

GRRRR - twice I've needed to edit my response. . . must be an "interesting" (NEVER SAY BAD) writing day for me (LOL). . . any hoot-hoot, said the nearby owl:

Love-rich writing, good flow.

Kid-based works don't automatically make me go warm n' fuzzy - I'm usually a more a "sharp, short, brutal" technical writer - but your work made me step outside my hard shell/self and bask in your brief-verse glow. . . that takes a lot of talent to do that, my friend. :)

June_Butterfly said...

Brian!!Good to see you!Oh,I see!Guess you were busy!

Thanks for dropping by!Hope things are well for you!!

June_Butterfly said...

Hi,Jane!I'm so glad you you appreciated it!

SOmetimes our dearest feelings are the hardest to convey.I'm glad was able to do this one.

June_Butterfly said...

I'm so privilege to know that my words reminded you of someone dear.Makes my words more special!

Thanks,Exception!Hope you can drop by again.

June_Butterfly said...

I fell in love with the picture as soon as I saw it!The words just flowed with it!

Talon,thanks for reading my work!

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks!Seldom can we find the right words to express our gratitude to those we love best!I'm glad you felt that way!

Thanks,Eric!

June_Butterfly said...

Thank you so much,Steve!I appreciate your efforts dearly!And it means so much to me to eb able to receive such compliments from you!Made the efforts worth it!

My deepest thanks!

H. Nizam said...

Hi June,
I am always amazed every time I visit, see and read your post.
Thank you for sharing.

June_Butterfly said...

Hi,Harry!Thank you so much for visiting!

I love your blog!Always have something to learn everytime I'm there.Thank you so much for enlightening us with your various posts!

Shashi said...

Dear June
Beautiful.. one word. I liked it so much. A great flowing verse.. Thanks for sharing..

ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

June_Butterfly said...

You're always so giving in your compliments,Shashi!Thank you so much!I'm glad you did!

River said...

A beautiful flowing piece. Thanks for a wonderful first read of the morning and visiting me with such sweet words. I wanted to tell you there is no law behind the rules. There is free verse and others that don't have rules. I have been thinking of taking a poetry class as a refresher on all the many types since its been over 15 years and I don't remember that much. But even with that I would write as I do today. If I write with a poetry form that has rules it is usually because I want the challenge. I have never been a conformist and if someone insists about something I usually rebel. Don't let the rules hold you back you are a free talented writer. :)

Claudia said...

isn't it fantastic when we have people like this and if we are people like this...leaving footprints of love behind...really liked this one

Ramesh Sood said...

So happy to read you.. I like butterflies and write a lot on them ..so the name attracted and clicked..coming from One Shot Poetry.. nice poem this! wonderful
expression of feelings..well done.

One Heart said...

Beautiful! Made me think of my dad who left me such a beautiful legacy in so many ways.

The simplicity of this particular piece is my favorite part of it. It links it to my dad even more since he was such a simple man.

Thanks June.

Gabriela Abalo said...

great poem for a great picture :)

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks,River!Will put that in mind!I do love to take on challenges ,too.Though it makes me nervous,too.Haha!!

So grateful for the advice.From now on will try to think of rules as plus factor ,not ropes that will tie my thoughts!

June_Butterfly said...

Indeed!It's a continous process of life.A great feeling to know we are connected to somebody for the rest of our lives!

Thanks for dropping by,Claudia!

June_Butterfly said...

I love butterflies,too!There's a beauty in them that is so eternal.I'm so glad to meet someone who loves them,too!

Hope to see more of you here,Ramesh!I love visiting your blog,too!

June_Butterfly said...

My parents separated when I was young.But I did have vivid memories of my father.He was good to me!!

I'm so glad that my words reminded you of someone dear!I bet your father was a lovely man.

The pleasure is always mine,One Heart!

June_Butterfly said...

Isn't the pic amazing!It speaks for itself!Was afraid I won't do it justtice!

Thanks for the compliment,Gabriela!

Eileen T O'Neill ..... said...

June_Butterfly,
I'm so glad that I took time to read your poem. Your words are very special and could apply to how I see my own children.
Legacy is so important and you have made the importance resound with your words.

Thank you for always visiting my blog also!
Best wishes, Eileen :)

June_Butterfly said...

Thank you,Eileen.And it's always a pleasure to visit your blog.

Looking forward to seeing you here,again.And will surely visit your blog,again.Your words and pics are always truly special!

Reflections said...

Fantastic piece, both picture and the legacy of words you have tied it too!

June_Butterfly said...

Always a joy to receive compliments from people who love to write like I do.And I did love the pic.

Thanks for dropping by!

GvSparx said...

I read quite a few poems today, so deep so imaginative, and so difficult to understand...
But this one is so beautiful that it just seeps into my heart... i am so amazed how easily you touched it, without anything superficially strong.
I am just struck. I would love to read more from you.
Do read mine if you feel like.
i hope I can learn from you.
GvSparx

June_Butterfly said...

Thank you so much for the compliment.I will be honest,I do envy those who have a wide vocabulary on their sleeves.But this is the only way I know to write.It makes me happy to know people appreciates my works for what they are.

I am just a beginner myself.Hope we can learn lots with each other.

It will be a pleasure to visit your place.And tahnks for taking time to visit mine,GvSparx

GvSparx said...

Remember lot of them will be envying you for the trueness of your speech.
It is always a pleasure reading your writing .:)

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks GvSparx.Will try to write as I always do.The only way I know to do,while also learning from others.Learning but not losing myself.

And it will be nice to see more of your work,too.

GvSparx said...

That is what I expect from you.
You can find me on facebook, if you like to.
Facebook

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks.Don't have an account for now but will surely do when I do.To be honest I have limited online time due to work and personal stuffs.But I try not to miss on my writing and reading,haha.

GvSparx said...

We are so similar..
haha!!
I never have time, but I am really opposite at the way I should be, when I comes to prioritising things..haha!!
You can add me on GTalk if you like to
greatgauravraora@gmail.com

June_Butterfly said...

Ok,will do once I have an account.There are so many sites I can't seem to cope up,haha.Time balancing.I truly am lousy with it.

Thanks for the various invite.I envy how you can be in so many places.Time for me to widen my world too,I guess!Thanks,Gv Sparx.You're so nice!

GvSparx said...

Haha!!
I don't want to scare you, but I am graduating in Information Technology, it would be criminal if I don't know them all :D
Gtalk is a service integrated in your Gmail. visit your inbox it is on left of that page.

June_Butterfly said...

Haha!Ok,let me check it.So am confused with these technologies,haha.

Thank you so much GvSparx.It was truly a great pleasure to have known you.And thanks for the info.Will be looking forward to seeing you more.Am off to work,now.Got to earn.haha.

Have a great day!

GvSparx said...

Haha!!
Ok!
You to have a great day..
Bbye :)

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks,GvSparx!Had a nice time!

Just Be Real said...

June very lovely. Also, thank you for your encouraging words to me as well. Blessings to you dear one!

Wanda's Wings said...

Just beautiful!!!

June_Butterfly said...

Hi,JBR!!I'm so glad you can drop by to read my work!

You are a beautiful young lady!There's still so much that awaits you!

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks,Wanda!Hope you're feeling much better now.Take care,always!

Kuolema said...

I love this one,very beautiful

June_Butterfly said...

Hi,Kuolema!So nice of you to drop by!

You have a beautiful blog,too!

GvSparx said...

Hey you there?

Come on my blog!!
And click chat with GvSparx !
Blog:GvSparx

June_Butterfly said...

Hi,GV!Thanks for dropping by!Sorry was doing my other blog and was catching up on my reading.

HAPPY THANKSGIVING!

GvSparx said...

Okay!!
Never mind!!
Happy thanksgiving to you too :)
I read about it on wikipedia and all,but I still want to know, what does thanksgiving mean to real people in US and Canada

June_Butterfly said...

Sorry ,Gv!Don't celebrate it where i live ,too.

GvSparx said...

sad!!
Are u on any Social networking site or chat platform?

June_Butterfly said...

Hi,Gv!Not rally on chatting lately.When I'm not on my blog ,I read other people's works.I only have limited time so if ever I have time I try to catch on my readings.