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Monday, October 3, 2011

The Wait!!!



Behind the smile,sadness dwells.

An empty soul that can not find its rest.

Behind the strength,weakness dwells.

A heart that seeks to find love at its best.


I've given love with utmost selflessness.

I guess I even made the angels restless.

But in the end I find myself defenseless.

To life's realities that bringforth loneliness.


With every hello and every goodbye a pain remains.

Like a dark shadow it fills my soul with emptiness.

But with hope and faith my heart longingly waits.

For that one love that will pull me out of this nothingness.

37 comments:

Brian Miller said...

i hope that love finds you soon enough...i believe it will smiles...

always good to see you...

Dulce said...

that's the love that matters... amazing poem

Wanda's Wings said...

Well written and thoughtful.

June_Butterfly said...

And it's always a joy to see you,Brian!Thanks for always taking time to read my works!

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks,Dulce.So amazing to see you here,again.Hope you can drop by ,again!

June_Butterfly said...

I'm glad you liked it,Wanda!Life is not as easy as we hope it could be.But we try to survive,always!

Reflections said...

Such a deeply touching piece. It is that love that pulls us out of nothingness that is truly worth the wait. Powerful write!

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks for dropping by,Petrina!!I'm truly glad you liked my work.I loved reading yours!

The Unknowngnome said...

With Hope and Faith you seek and you will find. In your weakness He is strong and that One Love awaits you.

You have said much 12 lines. Nice!

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks,Unknowngnome.My words do bring me comfort at times I need it most.

Marbles in My Pocket said...

The first line strikes a cord with me. I spent a llot of my life hiding behind a smile that wasn't real, hiding the pain. I can say it's real today, and I wear it almost all the time.
Nice poem, about the search for that true love that will complete you. Well done!

June_Butterfly said...

I'm so happy for you,Charles.Sometimes I wonder if I ask too much of life.Thank you so much for the compliment.I'm glad this piece turned out good.For my works are truly the reflection of my soul.

Munir said...

This is so touching, there is a fine hurt but it is beautiful. They say the true art of the artist does not shine unless they have experienced the pain it presents. I hope that you are doing good.

Ann LeFlore said...

This is an amazing poem and I hope that love will find you soon
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/10/03/memories-and-photographs-of-you/

June_Butterfly said...

I guess you're right,Munir.Sad but true.Pain does tend to bring out the best in writers or artists.Happiness does,too.But I guess one can only understand pain if one had felt it one time or another.

June_Butterfly said...

Lovely to see you here again,Sarah!!Thanks for the compliment.I hope love does,and soon.

The Unknowngnome said...

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Morning said...

beautiful and thoughtful.

welcome back.

Carrie Burtt said...

Like hope it is here and you will find it....and it is always worth the wait....this is lovely June!!
:-)

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks,Unknowngnome for the nomination.TUG is a very wonderful blog,too.Honestly am in a dilemna as to what blogs to nominate.I LOVE LOTS!!

June_Butterfly said...

Again,thanks Morning.Nice to be back.Hopefully can post often.

June_Butterfly said...

I'm so glad you liked it,Carrie.I truly hope so.SOmetimes I wonder if it is already here and I am just not aware of it.

meethimirchi said...

A heart that seeks love ~ floods with hurt ~ with each smile ~ pain remains well put into :)

Shashi said...

Oh Yes... you will find what you desire most as the universe than conspires to give you what you yearn for so longingly... Wish when you have, you have the eyes to see it..
I enjoyed your lines..

"With every hello and every goodbye a pain remains.
Like a dark shadow it fills my soul with emptiness."


Thanks for sharing. Look forward to your entry in the coming poetry picnic week 8 theme “Friends, relationship… ”

Shashi

ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/10/whispers-love-and-loss-butterfly.html

Kremo said...

Brilliant !

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks,Kremo.So sad that I can't seem to comment on your blog.Need to fix my computer.I love your piece.

crimsoncorvus said...

i can very much relate to this. like you I am also a hopeless romantic waiting for something that seems like its never gonna be coming. very nice well written piece! the emotions were well delivered and the point was well addressed. please check my entry too @ "A Sudden Rush".

Jack Edwards Poetry said...

Great poem with strong use of rhyme.

http://www.jackedwardspoetry.blogspot.com/

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Beautiful and so sad. I too wait in the dark for love. Will it ever come?


Melanie

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks for dropping by Jack.Real sorry that I can't comment on your blog.Am trying to fix my pc so I can do that.Pls.do drop by,again.

June_Butterfly said...

Appreciate your kind words,Crimson!Happy to see people coming and talikng time to read my work.Love your work ,too.

June_Butterfly said...

I wish I could answer your question,Cassiopeia Rises.There were times when I thought I found it only to fall into the pit of sadness.But I never was one to regret things.So I move on.Just keep on moving on.

Rosie@travel-i-tales said...

That last line is powerful...one does need to be pulled out of nothingness to live a life of meaningfulness.
Rosie

Andy said...

Hello.
Hauntingly beautiful.
May you find the love you seek...it's worth waiting for.
Awesome image!

Thanks for sharing.

Yesterday With You

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks for dropping by ,Rosie.Totally love your blog.Beautifully done.

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks for the wish,Andy.I hope we all find the love we seek.

Torch Bearers said...

Lovely Poem. May The Lord bless you in finding the love.. that he shall sustain and that shall complete you.
Torch Bearers (Sennen)