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Friday, December 3, 2010

Living Dreams In Reality!(Jingle Poetry Potluck)



Ballet shoes
and mystic moves.
Pretty sights
that bring out sighs.

My dream,in unconcious longing I create!

Dirt filled snickers
walk its way under lights that flickers.
Busy faces
that have lost their life's aces.

My reality,in concious longing I debate.

But I fight to dream ,to dance my way.
In the dancefloor of life I dare to sway.
Ballet shoes in rough roads I can't wear.
But my dirt filled snickers will take me there.

48 comments:

Shanty_bb said...

It's really nice and pretty. I like it ^-^

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks,Shan.So nice of you to drop by!I appreciate it.

TALON said...

I love the contrast of sneakers and ballet shoes all wrapped up in the dreams of one person...

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks ,Talon.Fell in love with the contrast myself.

Loved your piece.Truly amazing write!

scentofmyheart said...

I agree with Talon here, the image combines perfect with your words, sweet poem. Here is my entry http://scentofmyheart.wordpress.com/2010/11/10/libertango/

booguloo said...

You've got to know your role(s)!

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks,Blaga!Your piece made me feel sexy,haha.

So nice of you to drop by.Happy day!

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks for the advice,Booguloo!Dreams and reality can get confusing.

Thanks for dropping by!

The Unknowngnome said...

A very nice ballet of words!

jessicasjapes said...

Love the last 2 lines, and the comparison of the ballet shoes and sneakers.

http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2010/12/06/snow/

Kellie said...

your blog and this write are both just beautiful! im happy i found you thru potluck! :)
Kellie

Reflections said...

Lovely musical piece, wanting to let your snickers take you to new places, of delicate yet powerful moves.

fiveloaf said...

totally agree. here's mine- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/01/15/head/

Brian Miller said...

we must learn to dance in the shoes we have been given...dance on...dance on...

ScottlB said...

be graceful in your snickers and dance away. very nice poem like it

http://words4afriend.wordpress.com/2010/12/06/plateau/

Jingle said...

dynamic, elegant, and smart piece.
Happy Potluck!

A+

magher1 said...

hello again ;) I love the comparison of life to a dancefloor... and this part:
'But I fight to dream ,to dance my way.'
Awesome!

ButterflyJoi said...

I thought the contrast of the reality (sneaker) and dream (ballet slipper) was really heartfelt. I like this a lot. ~ C

Dulce said...

I dance your words with or without shoes...
great work

Hope said...

wonderful thoughts portrayed nicely in this creative piece of poetry!

thank you

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks,Petrina.Took me awhile to find the right words.But I truly loved this pic and I wanted to use it.so glad you liked it!

June_Butterfly said...

Unknowngnome,thank you so much for always supporting my works.

Always a joy to see you here!

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks,Jessica.The contrast was what captured my attention when I saw the pic.

Thanks for your compliments.

June_Butterfly said...

The pleasure is all mine,Kelly.ALways a joy to meet fellow word lovers!

Do drop by,again!

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks,fiveloaf.Your piece was amazing as usual!

June_Butterfly said...

True,Brian.It doesn't pay to dance on shoes you're not accustomed to.

Thanks for the comment.Always appreciate it!

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks,Scott!Will surely try!

Hope to see you here,again!

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks,Jingle!Thanks for dropping by and complimenting my works.

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks,Magdalena.I love that line ,too.Sometimes words just pop out from nowhere.SO glad you liked that line,too.

Looking forward to seeing you here,again!

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks,Magdalena.I love that line ,too.Sometimes words just pop out from nowhere.SO glad you liked that line,too.

Looking forward to seeing you here,again!

June_Butterfly said...

So glad you liked the contrast,too.That was what drew me to the pic and made the words flow from me.

Hope you can drop by again,Cherryl!

June_Butterfly said...

You're always so sweet,Dulce.It is truly a joy to have met you.

Thanks for always dropping by!

June_Butterfly said...

Hope,thanks for the comment.It always amaze me how beautiful your words get together.To be complimented by you is a privilege.

June_Butterfly said...

Kellie,real sorry for the mistake on the name.

Pardon my mistake!

Maria said...

HI June!
love this poem!
I LOVE to dance, but most often, I'm in my Sketcher's mary janes getting through "the dance of life" at work and home ♥
loving the dance whatever the beat!
*blessings of peace and joy*
~Maria

June_Butterfly said...

Hi,Maria!Me,too!Love to dance and sing.But now mostly dancing the dance of life!

Hope you're having a great day!

Just Be Real said...

Sweet and beautiful! Blessings.

Claudia said...

yes - yes - yes - what else than those dirt filled snickers...

abthomas said...

A great write that really lifts one up!

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks AbThomas!Appreciate the compliment!I'm truly glad you liked it!

June_Butterfly said...

JBR,thanks for always dropping by!

Blessings to you,too!

June_Butterfly said...

Yes,let the dirt filled snickers take us there.

Thank you so much,Claudia!

Kavita said...

Ohh... kinda sad, but beautiful nonetheless!
I really like the switching between dream and reality in this poem.. it's been done wonderfully well!
And finally, where you say how your dirt shoes will show you how to dance... that's absolutely stunning! Lovely message here, June.. hopeful and positive!
Stay thus, my friend..
xoxox

Jingle said...

Thanks for the love at JP...
love your spirits.
keep up the excellence.

Award/Treats 4 Poetic Friends of Jingle, Happy Thursday!

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks,Kavita!Most of these stuffs are intended for me.To help me be positive ,always.Which is sometimes so hard a task.

Love yours!Am learning lots from you,guys!

June_Butterfly said...

You've been real nice and supportive,Jingle.Thanks,too.

Gabriella Beth Invitti said...

This is really beautiful!
I admire his poetry.

Kisses from Brazil.

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks,Gabriela.I'm so glad you liked it.

Pls.drop by,again.