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Sunday, December 12, 2010

Bringing Thoughts To Life!!!(Jingle Poetry Potluck)


They are my fears,
my greatest pains.
They are my joys,
my treasured dreams.

With these bare hands they come to life.
With utmost courage I dare to type.
With doubts in heart,I chose to rise.
With my own style,I make them rhyme.

My thoughts in words,I share to you.
My heart and soul,I bare to you.

44 comments:

Hope said...

awesome! perfectly said!

Morning said...

My thoughts in words,I share to you.
My heart and soul,I bare to you.

powerful words in you,
cool piece.
Thanks for sharing!

A+

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks,Hope.Actually was kinda doubtful about this one.Glad you liked it.

June_Butterfly said...

Thank you so much for the compliment,Morning.

I appreciate you dropping by!

The Unknowngnome said...

Very tender, very brave.

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks,Unknowngnome.Was nervous about posting this one.I'm glad you appreciate it!

Brian Miller said...

everytime we hit publish or pick up the pencil we leave a bit of our hearts on the page...hoping people like it and dont step on it...nicely said...

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks,Brian.Am still feeling nervous everytime I post.But I guess the fun of writing is stronger than my fears.

jessicasjapes said...

Very sweet and heartfelt! It's always scary when we publish our thoughts.

http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2010/12/13/ice-cream/

Gabriela Abalo said...

Awesome writing, powerful poem!

have a lovely week.

loveNlight
Gabi

Flying Monkey said...

Beautifully said!

RiikaInfinityy said...

Great words that absolutely have my agreement on these!=D

booguloo said...

When in doubt type it out and share... because we all care!

drmadangoyal said...

Every body opens up while conveying something.
Fantastic words.

liv2write2day said...

I love the image you chose for this clever poem.

Just Be Real said...

Appreciate you sharing your thoughts here. Blessings to you June.

dan roberson said...

When our thoughts parade across the stage they are naked and exposed. Just remember that we are poets, sensitive to the feelings of each other, and we, too, share that same stage.
As for your poem, it was beautiful and well said.

Shashi said...

Great verse... powerful and lovely..


ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

abthomas said...

nicely done - a great write on the rawness of writing at times

Gabriella Beth Invitti said...

Love should be this well: courage, doubt, and give us.

Kisses from Brazil! ;*

Cheryl said...

As a fellow writer, this poem put into words what I try to do everyday, which is bare my soul in words. This is a beautiful poem and the picture you chose fits perfectly.

~ C

June_Butterfly said...

Yeah,it is.Thanks for dropping by,Jessica.I truly appreciate it.

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks,Gabi!i'm glad you thought so.

Have a lovely week,too.

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks,Flying Monkey.Pls.do drop by,again.

June_Butterfly said...

I'm glad,Riika.I'm glad you agree with me.It makes it worth it.

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks,Michael.I won't forget that.One of the lovely things about writing.You can pour your heart out.

June_Butterfly said...

I guess you're right.Sometimes it is the only way to convey our deepest thoughts.

Thanks for dropping by,Dr.Madangoyal!

June_Butterfly said...

I love it too,Victoria.Was love at first sight when I saw it.

June_Butterfly said...

As I do,yours!I always learn lots from your blog,JBR!Your courage is undeniable.

Always appreciate you dropping by!

June_Butterfly said...

You said it ,right.I guess we writers have the same fears.

Thanks for the compliment.Heartfully appreciated.

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks,Shashi.So glad you could come and read my post.

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks,AbThomas.I guess writing can leave one bare.

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks,Gabriela.I'm so glad you can drop by my place.

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks,Cheryl.I guess we all bare a part of ourselves everytime we write.Not an easy task and sometimes leave us vulnerable.

Dulce said...

Greatly done June... you are genuine!

Thank you

Claudia said...

heat and soul we bare with our poetry - so true - thanks for this - makes our world a bit richer

Anonymous said...

Really nice i guess this is the source of your joy ^^

Just Be Real said...

Came back for another read June. Blessings.

Multibrand said...

Hi June,

I am glad to be back here reading your beautiful poem.

Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year.

me_duress said...

Powerful and absolutely beautiful - the strenght in your words will never let you down!

Jingle said...

Greetings!

I invite you to become a participant at Thursday Poets Rally Week 36…

Entry your entry here 4 Poets Rally Week 36 and sign agreement if you wish


That’s a better way to make poetic friends, and have your talent directly exposed to fellow poets.
Poetry awards are to be given upon completion.

Hope to see you in, Happy Friday, best wishes for the year of 2011.

xoxox

Margaret Bednar said...

.. and with these simple, but beautiful words, I am a follower!

lynnaima said...

And I totally agree....Happy rally!http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/01/02/roaring-tiger/

Lucky Charmer said...

Very lovely! You're a great writer