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Friday, March 12, 2010

DREAMS!!!

(A Collaboration Poem,By Shanty and June)


Like sweet breaths,they invade your soul.
In your quiet slumber they give you hope!
They are your longings,your deepest passions.
Reflections of your pains,melodies of your joys.

Some you remember,some you rather forget.
Some bring tears,some bring smiles that engulfs.
Some are like shooting stars,blinding in its beauty.
Some are like thorns,stinging in its viciousness.

Fear not their strength of conviction.
They are yours to mould and make come true.
Fear not the promises that they make you long.
They are your Dreams. They are worth fighting for.

28 comments:

nohaemile said...

This is an amazing poem..
so deep and I really liked it has simply elaborated on the contraries of dreams..

Brian Miller said...

wonderful...great poem. dreams are worth fighting for...

Brianna Snow said...

June, both you and Shan did a excellent job together in writing this poem, it's really powerful towards the way dreams should be reached but also deep in words too, well done the both of you.

June_Butterfly said...

Hi,Loreena!

Thanks for dropping by!I love your blog.

Your works are fabulous!

June_Butterfly said...

Hi,Brian!

So nice of you to drop by ,again!

Yeah,i think they are.Especially if you truly believe in them.

June_Butterfly said...

BB!!!!!

Sweetie ,Thanks for dropping by!

Welcome to the Blogger World!Goodluck,sweetie.^-^

Rinka said...

very very true...beautifully composed

THE BEATY said...

nice thats awsome

Antônio Araújo said...

Amazing... God bless your life!

June_Butterfly said...

Hi,Rinka!

So nice of you to drop by.I'm glad you appreciated it.

Do drop by,again.

June_Butterfly said...

hi,JP!!

I'm glad you liked it.

I love this one,too.

June_Butterfly said...

Hi,Antonio.

Welcome to my blog.

I hope you can come,again.Have a nice day!

Maria said...

Hi!
Your poem is beautiful. There is so much imagery in it {which I love}
The poem describes our dreams well~

Thank you for stopping * I do appreciate your visit*
~Maria

June_Butterfly said...

Hi,Maria!

The pleasure is mine.

Thanks for dropping by,too.Pls. do drop by ,again.

Good day!

Ellie Great said...

Amazing!

June_Butterfly said...

Hi,Ellie!

Thanks so much for dropping by.And also appreciate the compliment.

Please do drop by ,again.

Avijeet Das said...

Dreams are worth fighting for Beautiful lines...

June_Butterfly said...

Hi,Avijeet Das!

Thanks for the compliment.Hope you can drop by,again.

Good Day!

Lloyd said...

Amazing who our Lord uses you to write such a lovely poem. God bless, Lloyd

June_Butterfly said...

HI,Lloyd!

Thank you so much for the kind words.Hope you can drop by,again.

TJ Lubrano said...

You two wrote it down perfectly! Very lovely ^_^!! Dreams are indeed worth fighting for and that's what I plan to do!

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks for the compliment.

Goodluck,then.I intend to follow mine,too.

prashant said...

it's really powerful towards the way dreams should be reached but also deep in words too, well done the both of you.
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Sh@KiR@ CK said...

I LOVE the last line. Awesome! An excellent poem. hugs, shakira

June_Butterfly said...

Hi,Prashant!

Thank you so much for commenting on my works.Gives me the drive to write more.

Please do drop by ,again.

June_Butterfly said...

Hi,Shakira!!

So nice to see you here,again.I love the last line,too.Inspiring.

Hope to see you here,again.

Susannah said...

Yes, dreams are worth fighting for!
Really nice, :-)

June_Butterfly said...

Hi,Susannah!

Yeah,I believe they are.And I'm glad lots of people believe that,too!

Hope to see you here,again!