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Monday, October 18, 2010

Melody Within!!!(One Shot Wednesday)




There is a melody within my being.
Made of notes and keys of who I am.
A sonata of my life's joys and pains.
Growing melodious as I go on my journey!

There is a song within my soul.
Made of lyrics of the person that I am.
A beautiful ballad of my smiles and tears.
Growing soulful as I face my destiny!

There is a symphony within my heart.
Made of sounds of instruments of what I am.
A concerto of my weaknesses and strengths.
Growing harmonious as I prepare for eternity!

34 comments:

Brian Miller said...

ah yes...and to hear such music from within...and to be able to share it with another...i really like this piece..great flow and beautiful words...nice one shot!

June_Butterfly said...

Brian,thanks for always inspiring me to do better.And for always taking time to read my works.

You are a great example of how a writer should be.Giving enough to share,and supportive of others.Thanks!

Tina said...

This was lovely. As a musician, and a believer in eternity, you spoke to me through your carefully chosen words. Nice to meet you!
Tina

June_Butterfly said...

Hi,Tina!It's so nice of you to come and read my work.

Music will always be one of the greatest loves of ly life.ETERNITY...can't wait for it!

Was a pleasure to meet you!

patty said...

"A beautiful ballad of your smiles and tears" This poem is such a beautiful reflection of the music of life within us all. fab One Shot! xo

June_Butterfly said...

Hi,Patty!Thank you so much for dropping by.One Shot have really been goos to me.Gave me the chance to meet other word lovers like me.

I'm so glad you liked my work.I guess music is already a part of me.And I think of most of us!

Claudia said...

oh - this speaks to my musician's heart...beautiful..A concerto of my weaknesses and strengths..such a flow in your beautiful words..

Shashi said...

Musically beautiful....

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Om Namah Shivaya
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Eric Alder said...

Interesting One Shot, describing life as an on-going song, melodies and lyrics changing and growing as you go along.

nothingprofound said...

What a wonderful way to view yourself and your life. The music metaphor is sustained beautifully throughout.

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks,Claudia!So nice of you to drop by.Appreciate the compliments.And I love your works.Always a joy to read your piece.

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks,Shashi.I guess the musician in me just popped out!

June_Butterfly said...

I guess life is indeed like music..Its range differ from ballad ,to jazz.From love songs ,to rock.

If there's something as interesting as life,it's music.

June_Butterfly said...

Coming from you,it's a privilege,Marty!Thanks for dropping by!

mommylebron said...

Oh this was so sweet. I can always relate my emotions to music and I feel music so strongly.

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks,mommylebron.I truly love what you've written,too.

The best for you,always!

Gabriela Abalo said...

beautiful - touching one shot

Wanda's Wings said...

How very beautiful. Thank you for dropping by my blog with your words of encouragement.

Pete Marshall said...

you played some great notes with this one...thanks for sharing with one shot....cheers pete

tuberider said...

and that's a very melodic poem! Nice.

June_Butterfly said...

Hello,Gabriela!Thanks for dropping by!Hope you can drop by ,again!

June_Butterfly said...

Hi,Wanda!The pleasure is all mine.And thanks so much for following!

Looking forward to reading your post,again!

June_Butterfly said...

Hi,Pete!I still feel nervous about posting for One-Shot!But everone have been real nice.

Thanks for dropping by!

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks tuberider!Still got to learn lots,though!Appreciate the compliment!

Steve said...

Highly enjoyable self-celebratory work.

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks for dropping by ,Steve!Hope to be better,though!

Maria said...

This is so beautiful.
It truly resonates with my own heart and soul.
I've read it a few times through already ♥
It's one to keep ~
*I also love all the artwork on your blog.
~enjoy a sweet weekend~
Maria

June_Butterfly said...

Thank you so much,Maria!!Sometimes there's so many anger inside of us that we forget reasons.But as long as there is a melody inside to give us peace,then it will be alright.

JH said...

I love the flow of this write... a serene feeling.. Very nice shot~~`

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks,JH!!Still quiet nervous about posting at one-shot.I'm lucky it's filled with warm people ready to welcome every word lover.

Looking forward to seeing more of you,here!

Multibrand said...

I like the picture and the lovely words. You really are talented.

June_Butterfly said...

Thank you so much,Harry!I strive to be better still.

Good day!!!

The Unknowngnome said...

Your poem has the breath of life. Well done!

It's always nice to hear/read another stranger's song. Melodies can grow friendships along the journey. I'm happy to have stumbled across your path.

June_Butterfly said...

Thanks Unknowngnome for dropping by.I hope this becomea start of a good friendship.

Things happen for a reason.I bet there's a reason for us bumping to each other.Good day!!