Gracefully she moves,
MAJESTIC!
She awes,she delights!
MAJESTIC!
She roams the sea with elegance.
A queen that leaves you in trance.
She reigns the sea with her beauty.
A sorceress that makes you see eternity.
Behold her sight,for she's divine.
Behold her existence for she's a rarity!
36 comments:
Queen of the sea, reigning in awesome splendor. Whales are beautiful to watch. They're so powerful and so beautiful. Thank you for your descriptive poem.
True majesty!
Thanks,Dan!One of my greatest wishes is to see one with my own eyes.
They are majestic creatures.And I love them to bits.
They are,aren't they,Wanda!
Thanks for always leaving a comment,dear!
Magical words, sea creatures and beauty of salty water!
Thanks for the visit,scentofmyheart!I love the sea.
I like your closing line:
"Behold her existence for she's a rarity!"
A rarity indeed!
Thanks,Unknowngnome!I love that line ,too.They are indeed.one of natures most beautiful gifts to mankind.
Amazing picture, your words step up to her majestic beauty.
Fell in love with the pic as soon as I saw it!So glad you loved as much as I did.The compliment is deeply appreciated.
Thanks for the visit,Reflections!
Love the repetitions - truly brings out the sense of majestic propotions :)
So glad you liked it,Neha!Was actually reading this one aloud before I posted!Went a bit crazy,I guess.Haha!!
this is lovely...very nicely done and the near repitition plays very well...
Hi,Brian.Thanks for the comment.Was feeling playful.Actually the repitition seemed a nice idea.So glad you liked it,too.
Dear June
Its wonderful... I throughly enjoyed it. You have a way with describing nature and its element, this I have observed through my readings of your verses...
PS: Thanks for visiting my post. I have retouched my verse as it was the first draft in the morning today, as I wrote for Potluck... have a look, it has changed a lot.
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com
lovely!
Thanks,Shashi!!I appreciate the compliments!
Ok,Shashi!Will definitely check it out!
Thanks,Kris Lee(fiveloaf)!Hope you can drop by,again!
outstanding,
love the imagery and your words are perfect.
keep it up.
xxx
Perfect! very nice imagery!
thank you
You create a great image here and her power comes across. Loved it!
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Wish I could touch a Queen like that. Since young I am fascinated with these creatures.
Nice one June.
The entire feel of your blog is MAJESTIC. It is a breath-taking experience to see one.
So nice of you to drop by,Jingle!Was worried won't be able to come up with a post for Potluck.But the pic made the words flow naturally.
Thanks for the compliments.
Loved yours too,Hope!It is always a learning experience reading your works.Thanks for always taking time to support mine.
Hi,Jessica.The picture was just so majestic it was like words were pulled out of me while I was looking at it!
Thanks for commenting!
One of my utmost dream is to see one with my own eyes.Always loved them.Hope I can one day.
Thanks for taking time to view my post,Ronald!Always a joy to see you!
You're so nice,Victoria.Still hav a long way to go with my writing but with people like you appreciating my efforts everyday is a joyful challenge.
Your place is truly beautiful,too.
Wonderful tribute to such a great animal! Nicely done.
Thanks,Teresa.Sure love these creatures.Always leave me in awe!
Hi June,
I like this poem. Good!
Well done.
Beautiful written, hail the majesty and welcome her to poetry potluck :P!
That majestic site...how beautiful to be blessed with it..blessings...bkm
Hi,Harry!Real nice of you to drop by and read my work.
I appreciate it.
Hi,Riika!!Yeah,hail her majesty Queen Whale!*smiles*
Thanks for dropping by!
signed..bkm,thanks so much for the compliment.it's so nice of you to drop by and comment.
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