Her face was sketched in perfect beauty!
With eyes so deep it may have been eternity!
She catches your soul with her serenity!
And make you forget your own identity!
She was the one who made you laugh!
She was the one who made you cry!
She was the one who made you sigh!
She was the one who made you smile!
And now at nights when stars are bright,
you gaze upon the sky and search for her light.
Looking for the brightest one in your sight.
Hoping it wouldn't disappear through the night.And in the misty winter morning,
you lay in bed alone and shivering.
Your eyes met hers and felt a warmth so comforting.
As the girl in the canvas gave you a smile so enchanting.
31 comments:
what an intriguing sketch! is it yours?
the poem is magically written, capturing me right away
with the first verse
'her face was sketched in perfect beauty! With eyes so deep it may have been eternity! She catches your soul with her serenity! and make you forget your own identity!'
deep and compelling!
thank you
lovely...first impression...thsiis pretty sad...so close yet so far away...and so in love with only a picture....written very nicely though...
How magical the sketch and poem!
Beautiful and magical...love the sketch...June your whole blog is beautiful! :-)
That is a rather captivating poem. Very enjoyable read, thanks for posting.
crb.
No,Hope.Got it from devianart.I usually get my pics there.I wish it was mine,though.
I love the first lines ,too.Am so glad you liked it.
Yeah,it is indeed a sad love story.But the thought of being in love itself thus bring joy!
Thanks,Brian.Am glad you found it nice.
Fell in love with the pic as soon as I saw it.So glad you found my words magical as well,Wanda!
So nice to see you here,again.
Thanks,Carrie.The sketch indeed is very lovely!
I appreciate the compliment.Do drop by again.
Thanks,Carribean Fool.My heartfelt thanks for taking time to read my blog!
Happy one shot!
the poem had that magic charm that woerked so well with the image..but i kinda felt an underlying sadness too...enjoyable read...and thanks for sharing with OSW...pete
lovely and magical... beautiful read!
Your usual romantic, hopeful work. Good stuff!
*sigh* sadness in the piece. Love the sketch too. Cheers
Nicely put-together One Shot!
I really enjoy your site and the opening lines of 'Canvas Love Affair' set the stage for a beautiful piece of artwork.
I found your poem to be intriquing and captivating as I felt the transition made from mysterious to every woman who walks the earth...
Beautiful.
Thanks for dropping by,Pete!Always a privilege to be able to be part of one shot!
I guess there is indeed sadness,but the love overcomes it.Kinda scary kind of love???
I'm so glad that lots of people found my work magical.Made the efforts worth it.
Please do drop by again,Helena.
Thanks,Steve!The sketch just made the words pour out!Am glad you like it!
I guess the feeling of being left alone thus bring out sadness.The sketch brought out both sadness and a feeling of deep love.
Thanks for dropping by,Dustus!
I loved yours,Eric.As usual good write.
Please drop by,again.
And your blog is so warm,Tolbert!Especially love the background musid.So enchanting!
I'm glad you enjoy coming here,too.Hope to see you lots.
..With eyes so deep it may have been eternity!...loooooove this!!
Hi June,
A wonderful combination of sketch
on canvas and the love poem, WOW!
You amazed me.
Thank you so much ,Claudia.That line is one of my favs,too.
Thanks for dropping by,Weston!
Hi,Harry!Well,you amaze me ,always.But the sketch is lovely,isn't it.Fell in love with it the first time i saw it.
A captivating poem, your words paint a beautiful picture of longing.
Anita.
Thanks,Anita!The sketch helped me find the words for this poem.
Loved yours,too!
Dear June
Beautifully written and I liked the repetition of lines so much.. thanks for sharing..
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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Thanks,Shashi!I'm so glad you liked it.I hope I can wrtie inspiring ones like you always do.
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