Sweet fairyland as white as snow!
You come to me with dreams to show!
Silvery twilights in your majesty glow!
Beautiful melodies in your depths flow!
A world where magic spells come true!
Where wizards and fairies share a laugh or two!
A world where wishes do come true!
Where dazzling falling stars grant a wish or two!
Here I can be Tinkerbell .
Or sweet loving Ariel!
Here I can be Wendy.
Or sweet little orphan Cindy!
It is a world where I am free.
To dream,to wish and make life bliss!
It is a world where I am free.
To wait for my prince's adoring kiss!
(Linked to Jingle Poetry Potluck)
Thursday, November 18, 2010
Magical World!!!(Jingle Poetry Potluck)
Posted by June_Butterfly at 8:16 PM
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nice. a magical world that i would love to visit...hope you find your prince...
Sounds nice!!!!!!!
A June butterfly in fairyland white would surely give color to the melodies.
What a little spell you have cast!
This gnome is enchanted.
Haha,thanks Brian!Feel free to visit ,anytime!
Had fun writing this one,Wanda.Brought back childhood dreams!
Unknowngnome,you made me blush!Thank you so mcuh for the compliments.
I guess we all need some enchantment to spice up life!
Sweet poem - thank you for sharing
Haven't written something like this for awhile.I had fun.So glad you liked it!
The magic of imagination and creativity - perfectly expressed!
A sweet poem about a lovely place we'd all like to visit.
... and your blog is quite lovely.
Happy Potluck ...
Actually I had a blast writing this!Am so a Harry Potter,Disney and Magic fan.So it's like being a child all over ,again!
So glad you can drop by,Talon!
Yeah,I won't mind staying there.Going back and forth from reality and Fantasy!
I'm so glad you liked my blog,Jamie!
This is a wonderful place! I certainly would like to come visit here.
Thanks,Teresa!You're most welcome to visit!You can stay if you like.haha!
So glad you feel that way.
a dreamland for all,
love the imagery,
you have outdone yourself on this.
magical writing.
Enchanting piece, love the picture both in your descriptive imagery and in the pic. Well done.
Thanks,Jingle!Had a good feeling writing this one.Totally fun!
I love to relate pics to my words.Fell in love with this one as soon as I saw it!
Glad you can drop by,Reflections!
I love the magical world. Thank you for dabbing a twinkle in my eye tonight. :)
Those princes though..they can be a little overrated. :)
The pleasure is mine,River!So nice of you to drop by!
Haha,know what you mean.It was a nice rhyme,though!haha!
Coming here is already a magical place with this poem, it is even more amazing! =D
Thank you so much,RiikaInfinity!Loved reading your poem,too.The witch thing was amazing!
beautiful blog, beautiful words..
Thanks,fiveloaf!i'm glad you like my blog!!
very magical indeed!
imagery is awesome and the rhythm flows so nicely!
pleasure to be captured in your words of enchantment
thank you!
The pleasure is always mine,Hope!It's always a joy to see you here!
With Harry Potter fever all around,how can one resist magic!I'm so glad you were enchanted.Makes the efforts worth it!
Sounds like a wonderful place to be! Nice piece!
Lovely poem, summing up our fantasy land! Which girl wouldn't like to be Tinkerbell!!
Thanks for visiting me earlier.
This is sweet...I always had a crush on Tinkerbell, and now I realize I still do!
a beautiful and magical world you have created with your words :) lovely write.
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Thanks for dropping by ,Eric!Love your blog.Humurous and totally unique!
So nice of you to drop by,Jessica!Yeah,wouldn't mind being Tink,too!
Hi,Timoteo!Wow,That's cute!Guess just like my crush with Harry Potter.haha!
Thanks for checking out my post!
Hi,Rajlakshmi!Thank you so much for visiting my blog!Love your write.Would love to read some more of your works!
Hope you can drop by again,soon!
Sweet. And I love the look of your blog.
Dear June
Magical and a beautiful world....
Great picturisation... I like it...
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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Thanks,Heather!I'm glad you liked both my blog and work!
Hope you can drop by again.
Thanks,Shashi!Love the temple pics you posted ,too.I hope someday I can go and visit.
Your poem makes me want to be a child again, who still believes in fairies and frogs that turn into princes! Also, the background for your blog creates the perfect scene for your magical tale! :)
A nice write, but now I have the urge to have a Disney marathon!
Ooohh... How delightfully enchanting!
Sometimes, I really wish there were Harry Potter for real! :)
If you happen to find such a lovely world, would invite me too? I would love to step into it myself...
Oh, and btw, I LOVED your rhymes!!!
Thanks,TRYC(the reason you come).I truly appreciate the compliments.I guess there will always be a chld in us.Won't mind being tinkerbell once in a while.
Would love to have the marathon with you.I just love disney!
Thanks for dropping by,ABThomas
Thanks for dropping by,Kavita!had a great read with your post.
Hope to see more of you!And will definitely invite you if ever I did find a magical world.Would be great to have Harry there!haha!!
Wow! This is so eventful and innocent...beautiful!
Reminds me of the many trips to Disneyland I took my daughters on
and the fasination they experienced.
I enjoy your blog beyond the beautiful poetry.
Also, thanks so much for visiting my site again this week. You are an inspiration and I am always happy to see that you have stopped by...
Hope your Thanksgiving is filled with good friends and family, lots of food and a heart filled with thanks for all we have been given. Throw in some football too if you so choose. I'm enjoying your work and count you as one of my blessings!
week 11 potluck awards/treats 4 u
Thanks for the beautiful contribution on week 11 potluck, hope to see you next Monday!
Happy Thursday!
Happy Thanksgiving Holiday if you celebrate!
I'm so glad it reminds you of beautiful memories.Disneyland,i don't think i will outgrow it.
You are an inspiration too,Tolbert!Your blog makes me feel like home.
Always a pleasure to see you here,too!
Pleasure is mine,Jingle.Still need to catch up on my reading,though.
beautiful poem, so positive and innocent. love it!
Thank you so much.It's not often I write something like this.Truly enjoyed myself,gald you did,too.
Hope you can drop by again,Magher1
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