There is a melody within my being.
Made of notes and keys of who I am.
A sonata of my life's joys and pains.
Growing melodious as I go on my journey!
There is a song within my soul.
Made of lyrics of the person that I am.
A beautiful ballad of my smiles and tears.
Growing soulful as I face my destiny!
There is a symphony within my heart.
Made of sounds of instruments of what I am.
A concerto of my weaknesses and strengths.
Growing harmonious as I prepare for eternity!
Monday, October 18, 2010
Melody Within!!!(One Shot Wednesday)
Posted by June_Butterfly at 3:19 PM
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ah yes...and to hear such music from within...and to be able to share it with another...i really like this piece..great flow and beautiful words...nice one shot!
Brian,thanks for always inspiring me to do better.And for always taking time to read my works.
You are a great example of how a writer should be.Giving enough to share,and supportive of others.Thanks!
This was lovely. As a musician, and a believer in eternity, you spoke to me through your carefully chosen words. Nice to meet you!
Tina
Hi,Tina!It's so nice of you to come and read my work.
Music will always be one of the greatest loves of ly life.ETERNITY...can't wait for it!
Was a pleasure to meet you!
"A beautiful ballad of your smiles and tears" This poem is such a beautiful reflection of the music of life within us all. fab One Shot! xo
Hi,Patty!Thank you so much for dropping by.One Shot have really been goos to me.Gave me the chance to meet other word lovers like me.
I'm so glad you liked my work.I guess music is already a part of me.And I think of most of us!
oh - this speaks to my musician's heart...beautiful..A concerto of my weaknesses and strengths..such a flow in your beautiful words..
Musically beautiful....
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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Interesting One Shot, describing life as an on-going song, melodies and lyrics changing and growing as you go along.
What a wonderful way to view yourself and your life. The music metaphor is sustained beautifully throughout.
Thanks,Claudia!So nice of you to drop by.Appreciate the compliments.And I love your works.Always a joy to read your piece.
Thanks,Shashi.I guess the musician in me just popped out!
I guess life is indeed like music..Its range differ from ballad ,to jazz.From love songs ,to rock.
If there's something as interesting as life,it's music.
Coming from you,it's a privilege,Marty!Thanks for dropping by!
Oh this was so sweet. I can always relate my emotions to music and I feel music so strongly.
Thanks,mommylebron.I truly love what you've written,too.
The best for you,always!
beautiful - touching one shot
How very beautiful. Thank you for dropping by my blog with your words of encouragement.
you played some great notes with this one...thanks for sharing with one shot....cheers pete
and that's a very melodic poem! Nice.
Hello,Gabriela!Thanks for dropping by!Hope you can drop by ,again!
Hi,Wanda!The pleasure is all mine.And thanks so much for following!
Looking forward to reading your post,again!
Hi,Pete!I still feel nervous about posting for One-Shot!But everone have been real nice.
Thanks for dropping by!
Thanks tuberider!Still got to learn lots,though!Appreciate the compliment!
Highly enjoyable self-celebratory work.
Thanks for dropping by ,Steve!Hope to be better,though!
This is so beautiful.
It truly resonates with my own heart and soul.
I've read it a few times through already ♥
It's one to keep ~
*I also love all the artwork on your blog.
~enjoy a sweet weekend~
Maria
Thank you so much,Maria!!Sometimes there's so many anger inside of us that we forget reasons.But as long as there is a melody inside to give us peace,then it will be alright.
I love the flow of this write... a serene feeling.. Very nice shot~~`
Thanks,JH!!Still quiet nervous about posting at one-shot.I'm lucky it's filled with warm people ready to welcome every word lover.
Looking forward to seeing more of you,here!
I like the picture and the lovely words. You really are talented.
Thank you so much,Harry!I strive to be better still.
Good day!!!
Your poem has the breath of life. Well done!
It's always nice to hear/read another stranger's song. Melodies can grow friendships along the journey. I'm happy to have stumbled across your path.
Thanks Unknowngnome for dropping by.I hope this becomea start of a good friendship.
Things happen for a reason.I bet there's a reason for us bumping to each other.Good day!!
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