Am I greedy...because I want?
Am I naive ...because I believe?
Am I stupid...because I trust?
Am I a fool...because I love?
Am I a dreamer...because I hope?
Am I a romantic...because I desire?
I cry when I hear a sad song.
I scream when rage engulfs me.
I laugh when a joke is told.
I smile when i feel happy.
I guess I am but a woman.
I guess I am but a girl.
I guess I am but a child.
I guess I am but a human!
Tuesday, October 5, 2010
I AM!!!(One Shot Wednesday)
Posted by June_Butterfly at 5:12 PM
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28 comments:
Lovely and heartfelt. Cry, scream, laugh and smile! Thanks for sharing this.
Hi,Ben!!So nice of you to take time to come read my work.
Still finding my way through my words,but i'm glad you liked it!
and all of that makes us who we are...smiles. great to see you at one shot again...niver too late...smiles. just getting started...
Thanks,Brian.It's a pleasure to be there.
Can't wait to read what the others have written.
We are who we are, why pretend anything else? So yes, I like this post, and admire the poet for putting it right out there.
Thank you Gospelwriter for the compliment.I'm truly glad you appreciated my work.
So many questions but it sounds like you've found the right answeres.
Hi,KB!Thanks for taking time to read my work.
I hope I did.Living is like looking for answers endlessly.
Living is like looking for answers endlessly... your last comment sums up perfectly the feeling I got from reading your poem. thanks. honest and heartfelt
Just human.. and with its own faults and desires and pangs... liked it
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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Interesting poem June....Love the pix immensely....
felt it..echoes of my soul..you put it into words, but yeah this is who you are and who we all are ..just HUMANS..:) heartfelt one shot :)
Great thoughts that leaves a smile at the end =D~ Awesome read!
yes - and all this just makes us human - we cry and laugh and smile and..be just who we are..great one shot!
Wonderful One Shot, JB!
Thanks,Adam!I guess the search goes on!Good Day!
Thank you so much Shashi for dropping by!Yeah,I guess we are but humans.With faults and all.Interesting species.That's what we are!
Thanks,Avijeet Das!!!I love the pics you use in your works ,always.It's always a pleasure to drop by on your side,too!I'm glad you liked my work.
Thanks,Desert Rose!I so love your work,too.Was a pleasure reading it!Hail,to us humans!
Thanks for the kind words,Riika!Hope I can write as beautifully as you do.Love your Blog!
Thanks for dropping by,Claudia!I'm still on the learning process.But joining one shot wednesday was a gift for me.Can't believe how many beautiful writers there are !Can't wait to learn more!
Hi,Eric!Thanks for visiting.Please come visit ,again!
So glad you liked my work!
Lovely that you found the answers, and i felt it deep :)
Wild Rose,thanks so much for dropping by!And thanks for appreciating my work.
Living with passionate hearts ♥
I could never be "lukewarm" about life!
Wonderful poem!
*blessings always*
Maria
Hi,Maria!Always a joy to see you here.
With someone as warm as you,life will never be cold.
Thanks for dropping by!
Absolutely beautiful. So human, earthy, and true.
Hi.Martin!Thanks for the compliments.I'm so glad you liked it.Coming from you,it's a privilege.
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