They are my fears,
my greatest pains.
They are my joys,
my treasured dreams.
With these bare hands they come to life.
With utmost courage I dare to type.
With doubts in heart,I chose to rise.
With my own style,I make them rhyme.
My thoughts in words,I share to you.
My heart and soul,I bare to you.
44 comments:
awesome! perfectly said!
My thoughts in words,I share to you.
My heart and soul,I bare to you.
powerful words in you,
cool piece.
Thanks for sharing!
A+
Thanks,Hope.Actually was kinda doubtful about this one.Glad you liked it.
Thank you so much for the compliment,Morning.
I appreciate you dropping by!
Very tender, very brave.
Thanks,Unknowngnome.Was nervous about posting this one.I'm glad you appreciate it!
everytime we hit publish or pick up the pencil we leave a bit of our hearts on the page...hoping people like it and dont step on it...nicely said...
Thanks,Brian.Am still feeling nervous everytime I post.But I guess the fun of writing is stronger than my fears.
Very sweet and heartfelt! It's always scary when we publish our thoughts.
http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2010/12/13/ice-cream/
Awesome writing, powerful poem!
have a lovely week.
loveNlight
Gabi
Beautifully said!
Great words that absolutely have my agreement on these!=D
When in doubt type it out and share... because we all care!
Every body opens up while conveying something.
Fantastic words.
I love the image you chose for this clever poem.
Appreciate you sharing your thoughts here. Blessings to you June.
When our thoughts parade across the stage they are naked and exposed. Just remember that we are poets, sensitive to the feelings of each other, and we, too, share that same stage.
As for your poem, it was beautiful and well said.
Great verse... powerful and lovely..
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com
nicely done - a great write on the rawness of writing at times
Love should be this well: courage, doubt, and give us.
Kisses from Brazil! ;*
As a fellow writer, this poem put into words what I try to do everyday, which is bare my soul in words. This is a beautiful poem and the picture you chose fits perfectly.
~ C
Yeah,it is.Thanks for dropping by,Jessica.I truly appreciate it.
Thanks,Gabi!i'm glad you thought so.
Have a lovely week,too.
Thanks,Flying Monkey.Pls.do drop by,again.
I'm glad,Riika.I'm glad you agree with me.It makes it worth it.
Thanks,Michael.I won't forget that.One of the lovely things about writing.You can pour your heart out.
I guess you're right.Sometimes it is the only way to convey our deepest thoughts.
Thanks for dropping by,Dr.Madangoyal!
I love it too,Victoria.Was love at first sight when I saw it.
As I do,yours!I always learn lots from your blog,JBR!Your courage is undeniable.
Always appreciate you dropping by!
You said it ,right.I guess we writers have the same fears.
Thanks for the compliment.Heartfully appreciated.
Thanks,Shashi.So glad you could come and read my post.
Thanks,AbThomas.I guess writing can leave one bare.
Thanks,Gabriela.I'm so glad you can drop by my place.
Thanks,Cheryl.I guess we all bare a part of ourselves everytime we write.Not an easy task and sometimes leave us vulnerable.
Greatly done June... you are genuine!
Thank you
heat and soul we bare with our poetry - so true - thanks for this - makes our world a bit richer
Really nice i guess this is the source of your joy ^^
Came back for another read June. Blessings.
Hi June,
I am glad to be back here reading your beautiful poem.
Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year.
Powerful and absolutely beautiful - the strenght in your words will never let you down!
Greetings!
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Hope to see you in, Happy Friday, best wishes for the year of 2011.
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.. and with these simple, but beautiful words, I am a follower!
And I totally agree....Happy rally!http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/01/02/roaring-tiger/
Very lovely! You're a great writer
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