(A Collaboration Poem,By Shanty and June)Like sweet breaths,they invade your soul.
In your quiet slumber they give you hope!
They are your longings,your deepest passions.
They are your longings,your deepest passions.
Reflections of your pains,melodies of your joys.
Some you remember,some you rather forget.
Some bring tears,some bring smiles that engulfs.
Some are like shooting stars,blinding in its beauty.
Some are like thorns,stinging in its viciousness.
Fear not their strength of conviction.
They are yours to mould and make come true.
They are yours to mould and make come true.
Fear not the promises that they make you long.
They are your Dreams. They are worth fighting for.
27 comments:
This is an amazing poem..
so deep and I really liked it has simply elaborated on the contraries of dreams..
wonderful...great poem. dreams are worth fighting for...
June, both you and Shan did a excellent job together in writing this poem, it's really powerful towards the way dreams should be reached but also deep in words too, well done the both of you.
Hi,Loreena!
Thanks for dropping by!I love your blog.
Your works are fabulous!
Hi,Brian!
So nice of you to drop by ,again!
Yeah,i think they are.Especially if you truly believe in them.
BB!!!!!
Sweetie ,Thanks for dropping by!
Welcome to the Blogger World!Goodluck,sweetie.^-^
very very true...beautifully composed
nice thats awsome
Amazing... God bless your life!
Hi,Rinka!
So nice of you to drop by.I'm glad you appreciated it.
Do drop by,again.
hi,JP!!
I'm glad you liked it.
I love this one,too.
Hi,Antonio.
Welcome to my blog.
I hope you can come,again.Have a nice day!
Hi!
Your poem is beautiful. There is so much imagery in it {which I love}
The poem describes our dreams well~
Thank you for stopping * I do appreciate your visit*
~Maria
Hi,Maria!
The pleasure is mine.
Thanks for dropping by,too.Pls. do drop by ,again.
Good day!
Hi,Ellie!
Thanks so much for dropping by.And also appreciate the compliment.
Please do drop by ,again.
Dreams are worth fighting for Beautiful lines...
Hi,Avijeet Das!
Thanks for the compliment.Hope you can drop by,again.
Good Day!
Amazing who our Lord uses you to write such a lovely poem. God bless, Lloyd
HI,Lloyd!
Thank you so much for the kind words.Hope you can drop by,again.
You two wrote it down perfectly! Very lovely ^_^!! Dreams are indeed worth fighting for and that's what I plan to do!
Thanks for the compliment.
Goodluck,then.I intend to follow mine,too.
it's really powerful towards the way dreams should be reached but also deep in words too, well done the both of you.
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I LOVE the last line. Awesome! An excellent poem. hugs, shakira
Hi,Prashant!
Thank you so much for commenting on my works.Gives me the drive to write more.
Please do drop by ,again.
Hi,Shakira!!
So nice to see you here,again.I love the last line,too.Inspiring.
Hope to see you here,again.
Yes, dreams are worth fighting for!
Really nice, :-)
Hi,Susannah!
Yeah,I believe they are.And I'm glad lots of people believe that,too!
Hope to see you here,again!
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